Friday, October 3, 2008

thanks for the memories

A haunting in my dreams,
a whisper to the winds,
You were my wasted sighs.
But the meaning of me to you was simple.
You made me your spotlight,
To tend to your every order
as I tried to show you I was worth it.
Your kisses revealed no promises,
When you held me tight I worried.
I looked back.
Those times,
those days when we were together.
Why did I not realize that?
You were cruel but I saw past that.
I trusted to be the only one.
I KNEW you,
every piece.
you became a part of my heart forever to stay there.
Late nights, gifts, chocolates, inside jokes, it was only part of the things I relied on
that...
You still loved me.
You bragged, and showed me off like one of your trophies.
Somewhere I knew that you couldn't stay faithful.
I sighed at my imperfections
every night I prayed you would stay there for me.
I stayed like a statue.
To be there, be faithful.
Wasted was my heart.
You turned it black and until I quit.
But like a war,
YOU were easy to get into,
YOU were hard to get out of,
AND YOU were hard to forget.

2 comments:

The Angel Remliel said...

The ending is phenominal! My favorite line is "Wasted was my heart, You turned it black and until I quit," but take out the "and" and I think it will flow much better.

Jeff said...

Hello, This is quite passionate. It is like a film near complete. There are one or two places where replacing explanation for symbolism will spell the difference between flying and soaring. Jeff